Hey, I had your game as part of my video. Very creepy and the concept was simple, but kept me on edge. I loved the concept and I think there is alot to build off of. Great job!! Keep up the good work!
Really good for a 16 yo. You are on the right track, budy :) I think I was able to find 4 out of 5 endings, but can't figure out the last one. The game has some flaws and bugs, which is pretty normal. Is good that I was able to figure out the story before it was fully revealed, but don't know if I like the fact that only one of the endings actually tells you what happened. I think it all could be a bit more elaborated. Even though it has what we usually call a "cheap jumpscare" I still fell for it. Overall it was a pretty good job! Let's see what else you come up with, because you have talent =)
This game was very interesting. I did not know it has 4 endings and I might replay this just to see what other endings I can get . Your game is third and starts at 19:26
dunno what exactly has happened, but i was following the instructions to the moment with black&white creepy picture in the corridor (right in front of me, not one in the walls). ofc i turned the flashlight off as i was instructed. but then just several minutes of walking in nothing. no extra voices but my own steps, no lights, just nothing. what have i done wrong? i really would love to know that to continue plaing.
damn man good game but after I didn't listen to the voice and fall to the pit the game stop I could hear my steps but that's it after pressing W for like 10 minute I gave up should I continue?
Yeah sorry for the problem you have encountered. I'm still trying to fix this bug, but for now it's better if you close the application and restart the game
I'm playing through to try and get all the endings.
I got one so far, but on my second play through, after going through the door, I couldn't go forward very far, before an invisible wall kept me from going any further.
Now, I can't go back through the door, or go forward anymore... I also can no longer turn my flashlight off, so... No idea what happened lo
Fun so far though! Love the atmosphere :-D
Kind of spoilers below, I guess? (an explanation of what I've done to try and help with figuring out bugs)
(first playthrough, i listened to the voice to a T, this time through, I haven't, and got ran through by a couple of things, but got to this point)
I have done 4 endings.... I cannot figure out what the 5th one is.
The 4 I have done are the following:
Spoiler:
Gone to the end by listening to the voice, doing as she says and then 1st) followed the lights, got the 'so close' ending, 2) fell down, got the 'heaven' ending
Got to the end without listening to the voice (doing the opposite) and then 1) followed the lights, got the 'you're stuck here forever' ending, and 2) fell down, and got the.... second good ending? idk what to call it lmao
And CANNOT figure out the 5th ending. I stood in the elevator for a while to see if that was one, and nothing happened so.... help?? LOL
Sorry, but i can't tell you exactly how to find the last endings, but i can give you one clue: it's within another ending. And I'm glad that you had fun playing my game
Awesome game! It was very intense and had good jumpscares. It also made for a great video. I played this first of the 3 games, and I thought that it was the best one of them!
I really liked the game, I was really surprised, by the way you did a good job with the graphics and the atmosphere, I liked having to get several endings to understand the story, you did a good job with the game, I hope you keep making games, keep it up!!!
This Game almost gave me a heart attack the gameplay was smooth i liked the scares and I left some mystery for what happened to the 2 in the photos love it 8.5/10
Very good Job, much more thought out than the usual stuff you see on here.
Good lighting, and mood, the only thing critic worthy thing are obviously the cheap Jumpscares but one got me real good, and it's a small game, so that's normal. They could linger a bit more.
Good bits of Story, no one needs those big cars anyway, and always use Taxis or anything else, when intoxicated. I probably couldn't have made this at 16, i was too dumb, and played lots of Counter-Strike.
You have a way better grasp on different Parts of game design than most, which is great. Playing with certain gameplay aspects (flashlight, restricting movement, transitions, pacing, cinemachine flashlight movement?), and even replayability with the cheats.
Great thinking! Good work and you're levels above most, that make their first complete Game, keep on making Stuff and telling Stories!
//Sometimes the "Blockers" that restrict movement change the lighting on the ground. Are their renderers, and receive/cast shadows completely off? Or something is not baked right, light baking is always a pain in Unity.
Thank you so much for this comment and I'm glad that you liked my game. This game has a procedural generation mechanic, so I had a really hard time to bake lights, so that's the reason why you can find some buggy things going on with the light or parts of the corridor.
Good game man. As a gamedev who is a kid, you know I had to check this out. This game had me jumping out of my chair. I also think the part where it goes dark and you walk toward the music is one of the greatest transitions in a game ive seen.
At first the game was pretty confusing. I didn't really know what was going on. But after completing some endings I was able to put the story together piece by piece. Which was really fun to do. Even though the game was a bit buggy sometimes it was still fun to uncover the story. So good job!
It doesn't take long to realize what kind of experience you're expected to have playing this. This isn't necessarily a bad thing, though it does become a little repetitive and predictable. That said, this game does deliver on a lot of effective scares. Overall, this is a great experience for those looking for a simple scary rollercoaster ride. Well done, dev.
Hello the owner of the game. I am iix_FranK Gaming 🇹🇭 on YouTube and my nickname is Frank. I will come to encouragement comment for your only because this game is interesting. although nobody comes to your comment, I am willing to help encourage your Horror game and another English language that we can only speak each part of the vocabulary phrase that is remembered, but may not speak English like any other person, Because I'm not good at speaking English. except speak Thai language and you may not be able to listen to our Thai language because most of people don't have to read my language, but you don't have to read our language. it's no problem. because I just came to cheer up your horror game and your game Good✨ which is better than encouraging your game in case you continue to develop the game, hopefully you'll see this comment and make you glad and happy.
In anbetracht dessen, dass dieses Spiel ein 16 jähriger gemacht hat, muss ich sagen bin ich sehr beeindruckt. Ich habe selbst in diesem alter erste Erfahrungen gesammelt und fühle den Ehrgeiz dahinter. Natürlich ist das Spiel sehr einfach gehalten und erinnert etwas an eine Geisterbahn, allerdings finde ich faszinierend wie die Jugend mit den richtigen Tools schon großes leisten kann. Objektiv ist das Spiel nicht wirklich gut. Allerdings muss man sagen, merkt man den Lernprozess deutlich und dass verschiedene Dinge probiert wurden. Man Ahnt, dass hier nach Möglichkeit das beste versucht wurde. Das möchte ich wertschätzen und Subjektiv mit einer guten Bewertung belohnen. Ich hoffe Daniel bleibt am Ball und wir dürfen in Zukunft viele weitere Indietitel von ihm erleben und den Fortschritt mitbeobachten.
Thanks for commenting. This is my first ever complete and published game, so for me it is a big milestone to have reached in one year. I still have lots of time to improve my programming skills, but thanks for your honest review. And thank you for playing!
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Buen juego! me asustó! :)
Thanks!
:)
I'm a little confused about the endings... The feeling that I haven't found everything
Thanks for playing and trying out different endings
usually puzzle something complicated and good experience
AMAZING GAME
Thanks!
Second Game in this video, I'm pretty sure I broke something or something went wrong but regardless this is very good for what it is! good job!
Thank you for trying it out!
This was very good! I streamed it! Thangalang21
thank you! will check it out later
good
Thanks!
Tried out the game!
Thank you for playing
thanks for playing! Glad you enjoyed
Really good for a 16 yo. You are on the right track, budy :) I think I was able to find 4 out of 5 endings, but can't figure out the last one. The game has some flaws and bugs, which is pretty normal. Is good that I was able to figure out the story before it was fully revealed, but don't know if I like the fact that only one of the endings actually tells you what happened. I think it all could be a bit more elaborated. Even though it has what we usually call a "cheap jumpscare" I still fell for it. Overall it was a pretty good job! Let's see what else you come up with, because you have talent =)
Thank you for your review on the game. Loved the gameplay and really happy that you liked my game!
Super well made and a lot of fun to play!
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed
This game was very interesting. I did not know it has 4 endings and I might replay this just to see what other endings I can get . Your game is third and starts at 19:26
Thanks for playing!
Hey! Someone is trying to pass your game as thier own. They might even be trying to spread malware or something.
https://daniel-grimalda.itch.io/final-choice
Thanks for letting me know. Just reported him
dunno what exactly has happened, but i was following the instructions to the moment with black&white creepy picture in the corridor (right in front of me, not one in the walls). ofc i turned the flashlight off as i was instructed. but then just several minutes of walking in nothing. no extra voices but my own steps, no lights, just nothing. what have i done wrong? i really would love to know that to continue plaing.
I'm sorry to hear that. There are some bugs that I'm still trying to fix. so the only way is to close the game and restart it.
damn man good game but after I didn't listen to the voice and fall to the pit the game stop I could hear my steps but that's it after pressing W for like 10 minute I gave up should I continue?
Yeah sorry for the problem you have encountered. I'm still trying to fix this bug, but for now it's better if you close the application and restart the game
thanks
I'm playing through to try and get all the endings.
I got one so far, but on my second play through, after going through the door, I couldn't go forward very far, before an invisible wall kept me from going any further.
Now, I can't go back through the door, or go forward anymore... I also can no longer turn my flashlight off, so... No idea what happened lo
Fun so far though! Love the atmosphere :-D
Kind of spoilers below, I guess? (an explanation of what I've done to try and help with figuring out bugs)
(first playthrough, i listened to the voice to a T, this time through, I haven't, and got ran through by a couple of things, but got to this point)
I have done 4 endings.... I cannot figure out what the 5th one is.
The 4 I have done are the following:
Spoiler:
Gone to the end by listening to the voice, doing as she says and then 1st) followed the lights, got the 'so close' ending, 2) fell down, got the 'heaven' ending
Got to the end without listening to the voice (doing the opposite) and then 1) followed the lights, got the 'you're stuck here forever' ending, and 2) fell down, and got the.... second good ending? idk what to call it lmao
And CANNOT figure out the 5th ending. I stood in the elevator for a while to see if that was one, and nothing happened so.... help?? LOL
Sorry, but i can't tell you exactly how to find the last endings, but i can give you one clue: it's within another ending. And I'm glad that you had fun playing my game
Finished your game. It's the first game in the video. If you're interested in feedback, please let me know.
No problem, the gameplay is more than enough!
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Hope you enjoyed playing!
Awesome game! It was very intense and had good jumpscares. It also made for a great video. I played this first of the 3 games, and I thought that it was the best one of them!
Thank you! really happy you liked my game
Thank you!
I tried this game out it was one of three :)
Thanks for trying it out. Hope you enjoyed
I really shouldn’t have listened to that lady! Literally every jumpscare got me!
Thank you for playing
game yang cukup menakjubkan
Thank you!
It was fun!
Thanks!
A bad decision...
Thanks for the gameplay!
I really liked the game, I was really surprised, by the way you did a good job with the graphics and the atmosphere, I liked having to get several endings to understand the story, you did a good job with the game, I hope you keep making games, keep it up!!!
Gameplay PT-BR
Really happy you liked my game!
nice game
Thanks!
This Game almost gave me a heart attack the gameplay was smooth i liked the scares and I left some mystery for what happened to the 2 in the photos love it 8.5/10
Thank you!
Very good Job, much more thought out than the usual stuff you see on here.
Good lighting, and mood, the only thing critic worthy thing are obviously the cheap Jumpscares but one got me real good, and it's a small game, so that's normal. They could linger a bit more.
Good bits of Story, no one needs those big cars anyway, and always use Taxis or anything else, when intoxicated. I probably couldn't have made this at 16, i was too dumb, and played lots of Counter-Strike.
You have a way better grasp on different Parts of game design than most, which is great. Playing with certain gameplay aspects (flashlight, restricting movement, transitions, pacing, cinemachine flashlight movement?), and even replayability with the cheats.
Great thinking! Good work and you're levels above most, that make their first complete Game, keep on making Stuff and telling Stories!
//Sometimes the "Blockers" that restrict movement change the lighting on the ground. Are their renderers, and receive/cast shadows completely off? Or something is not baked right, light baking is always a pain in Unity.
Thank you so much for this comment and I'm glad that you liked my game. This game has a procedural generation mechanic, so I had a really hard time to bake lights, so that's the reason why you can find some buggy things going on with the light or parts of the corridor.
Good game man. As a gamedev who is a kid, you know I had to check this out. This game had me jumping out of my chair. I also think the part where it goes dark and you walk toward the music is one of the greatest transitions in a game ive seen.
Thanks for the comment! Really glad you enjoyed my game
Amazing game, insane work! Also me and my goldfish brain walked into a wall for 15 mins straight lol!
Yeah, sorry for that. Thank you for playing!
An amazing game, well done!
Thanks!
At first the game was pretty confusing. I didn't really know what was going on. But after completing some endings I was able to put the story together piece by piece. Which was really fun to do. Even though the game was a bit buggy sometimes it was still fun to uncover the story. So good job!
Hello friend, this game is awesome, I want to congratulate you for this good game, I want you to subscribe to my Youtube channel, thank you
Thank you for playing. Just subscribed
It doesn't take long to realize what kind of experience you're expected to have playing this. This isn't necessarily a bad thing, though it does become a little repetitive and predictable. That said, this game does deliver on a lot of effective scares. Overall, this is a great experience for those looking for a simple scary rollercoaster ride. Well done, dev.
Short and creepy, good work :)
Thank you!
This was not bad. Idk if I got all 5 endings but I definitely tried. I think I got 4. Made a video on it.
Thank you for your comment! hope you enjoyed
This, was INDEED, made by a 16 year-old...
it was indeed
Scary Scuffed Games #222
https://twitch.tv/ditodesign
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In anbetracht dessen, dass dieses Spiel ein 16 jähriger gemacht hat, muss ich sagen bin ich sehr beeindruckt. Ich habe selbst in diesem alter erste Erfahrungen gesammelt und fühle den Ehrgeiz dahinter. Natürlich ist das Spiel sehr einfach gehalten und erinnert etwas an eine Geisterbahn, allerdings finde ich faszinierend wie die Jugend mit den richtigen Tools schon großes leisten kann. Objektiv ist das Spiel nicht wirklich gut. Allerdings muss man sagen, merkt man den Lernprozess deutlich und dass verschiedene Dinge probiert wurden. Man Ahnt, dass hier nach Möglichkeit das beste versucht wurde. Das möchte ich wertschätzen und Subjektiv mit einer guten Bewertung belohnen. Ich hoffe Daniel bleibt am Ball und wir dürfen in Zukunft viele weitere Indietitel von ihm erleben und den Fortschritt mitbeobachten.
Ratings:
Dito: 4/5
Chat: 1.83/5
Gesamt: 2.92/5
Thanks for commenting. This is my first ever complete and published game, so for me it is a big milestone to have reached in one year. I still have lots of time to improve my programming skills, but thanks for your honest review. And thank you for playing!